Sunday, March 25, 2012

Mid Review #1

The review was very constructive. On a technical level the reviewer gave light to what was misrepresented and needed to be changed so that it reads better.

A few Comments: blow ups of specific points to better represent the gestures, perspectives - to understand what it would feel like to be in the space,

They told me to study the relationship between the jagged forms and the existing site.

In the end they said the ideas are there they just need to go further and be better represented. Which i am kinda okay with considering i just figured out what my project was on Tuesday! Now i just have to work hard and get a whole lot more done.

One thing a reviewer said in regards to all our projects was "you need to double the program not the experience" Simply put... WHY IS IT SOOO BIG!!!!


Same plan just some things show in each



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