Reworking it!!!

Okay so since the last time i posted my design i have decided i don't like it. Well that's not the way i should put i t. I like the forms i have the shapes but i knew there was something wrong i just didn't know what so i have been fudging it and trying to come up with something that i like and i think i have finally did it. So after i shrunk it from its massive size i decided to break up all the forms that i have arbitrarily created. I then did a few diagrams to see if it could potentially work.... Now i am making the same shapes on chip board and rearranging them to see if there are other options that could work better than the first one i made.